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caitlynsmygirl 
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 4:51pm |
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Because she deserves it .
Nia
If you had been in my arms
your whole world would be calm
you never would have known such pain
your name would not be so known
and like any child you'd have grown
free from sorrow and from shame
But thats not how your story went
Your life was disregarded
you were broken , bent
a story that ended on the wrong page
because you were the subject of somebodies rage
So many questions ,
and no answer thats right
who were they to take away
a light that shone so bright ?
how can it ever be
that people don't like a child whos three ?
they caused fear to live
inside of your heart
too scared to cry
because of what you knew it would start
I bet sometimes you wished
you could have flown free
I wish little one ,
that you could have flown to me
and your not the first
and you wont be the last
this is our present
and this is our past
too many children
are being abused
being tortured
being used
becoming the subject
of someone elses rage
and noone cares
til they end up on the front page
Lets hope your death was not in vain
lets pray we never see this again
and for you , sweet child
now its your turn to take what is owed
time to feel what they never showed
time to be happy , time to be loved
safe from harm ,
in the lords arms above .
Meh , its cr*p, I'll work on it and make it better ....
just had to write something after reading about her awful life in the herald today
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rachelsea
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 4:56pm |
You're great at writing Kelly. The story about wee Nia makes me so mad. I mean, did it make those #@!#$%!s feel tough doing that to a defensive little girl?  Then to read that one of the brothers was separated from the other men in prison "amid fears for his safety"... WTF?! Who CARES about HIS safety? Not me!
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 4:56pm |
Kelly, thats beautiful 
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 4:57pm |
im sorry , but cant say I care much for his safety either
and thanks Rach 
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 5:33pm |
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Kelly that is really fantastic. Well done.
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 6:03pm |
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Aww thats lovely Kelly you really have a way with words.
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 6:06pm |
Awwww Kelly make me cry even more. That was beautiful
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 6:23pm |
That tribute to Nia is beautiful, Truely heartbreaking stuff that happend to her poor soul...
NZ should look at bringing the death penalty here for cold hearted child killers....
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 6:25pm |
That was really lovely, brought tears to my eyes too
I can't even imagine what that precious little girl endured
I dont worry about the safety of those monsters either, 
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 6:54pm |
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Congrats kelly - you have out in a poem what we all feel. Words though can not explain what I think about those who did this to her. A worst of all is that she died thinking this was normal.
And those sick b#stards can rot in hell for all I care!
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 6:58pm |
chickaboo I agree..
Kelly... awesome! 
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 7:06pm |
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Kelly, that's beautiful!
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 7:07pm |
Kelly that is such a beautiful poem. Brought tears to my eyes.
You have a real talent. You should send that to the herald so lots of people can read it. It is truely amazing.
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caitlynsmygirl
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 7:15pm |
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Thanks so much guys (am v surprised since i cringe every time i read it haha, but thankyou )
what I REALLY want is for those " people " that did that to her to actually fully comprehend what they did , to feel the fear they made her feel , to feel alone and without anyones love .
I feel that the only reason they may have any remorse now, isnt for her , but for themselves, and the fact they got caught and found guilty .
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 8:10pm |
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Very beautiful, and fitting for such a gorgeous girl. Bloody mongrels!!!!..........and to think DP is related to that bug eyed mother of hers!!
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 8:28pm |
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Posted: 19 November 2008 at 10:59pm |
That was beautiful
I am glad that their trial is almost over and waiting for their sentencing they will probably only get 15 years not enough for killing an innocent child. I still can't believe that guy knew something was going on but did nothing about it makes me so angry as she will be out of there and into a safer environment
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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 12:52am |
Awww Kelly that is gorgeous!!
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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 8:50am |
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Beautiful Kelly!
Reading about horrible scum like the mother of Nia who didn't care about her at all, and then Kyah's poor mum Shanelle who would have given the world to keep her daughter here just makes my heart break.
May they both now run and play like 3 year olds should. RIP
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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 12:30pm |
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For Nia
